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IELTS Essay, topic: Internet connecting people
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- IELTS Essays - Band 7
Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
In today’s modernized era nobody has sufficient time to write letters to their loved ones. it also takes longer to send or receive any information the Internet is the easiest way to send messages to our loved ones. Communication can be either in the form of e-mail or through text messages sent via to mobile phones. We can send and receive messages straight .
To conclude, I would like to say that the Internet is one of the most modernized and most successful tools, not only for regarding every field in a very short period of time.
This is a great essay, well done! Remember, ‘the Internet’ is a proper noun, currently, there is only one. Pay attention to your punctuation – many commas are missing after linking words. Otherwise, the essay is well argued and set out.
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19 thoughts on “IELTS Essay, topic: Internet connecting people”
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Thankx for providing a such kind of perfect material
Can I also post my essays to get feedback on it please reply..?
Hi Tanveer, you can submit your writing to our team of IELTS teachers, who will check it and send you a detailed report with an estimated score. Learn here how to send your writing for correction .
I doubt the use of ‘rather than’ in the essay. You have changed ‘to participating’ into ‘participating’, but as long as I know the correct use in the essay should be ‘participate’. Seeing the entire sentence, “…. prefer to spend their time… rather than participate…”. I am concerned ‘rather than’ takes parallelism and in this case, it should be used without ‘to’. It’s confusing as what I know is different.
Hi Ji, you’re right, the correct form here is “to participate” and we have changed the essay comment accordingly. Thank you for the opportunity to improve our content!
Hi.I have a question.in this essay why the sentence “is going to be very popular …” is wrong?and another question,using both “besides” and ” as” is wrong?
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Hi Can you please suggest me…if we agree one one point..can we make 1 paragraph for disagree..please clear this point.. I m bit confused.
Hi Kuldeep, I’m not sure I understand the question, what are you confused about? Please explain a bit more about it.
there is one doubt that someone said me that starting the sentence with But is low band scorer …..Is that right??tell me
It isn’t a great idea to start your sentence with ‘But’ and if you can avoid it, please do so. This is why one of our suggested corrections in this essay is to get rid of ‘But’ in the beginning of the sentence.
Is it is a good idea to make one BP with one point including example and last lines of result ? Another BP with 2 idea with example and small conclusion ?
Hi Kulveer, when you say ‘last lines of result’ what do you mean?
‘through text messages sent via internet to mobile phones.’ I didn’t understand the correction in this sentence, how come ’sent via the internet’ makes sense?? Please explain..
Hi Safia, the definite article ‘the’ is needed before the word ‘Internet’ because the sentence is referring to the global network known as ‘the Internet’.
I’d like to prepare ILETs exam
Can you check my essay. Because I don’t know how chack my essay
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This is an IELTS writing task 2 sample answer essay from the real exam on the topic of the internet and schools. Education and technology/the internet are really common topics on IELTS so reading this can really help you to prepare!
line. the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant. Write an essay on the topic.
Remember, ‘the Internet’ is a proper noun, currently, there is only one. Pay attention to your punctuation – many commas are missing after linking words. Otherwise, the essay is well argued and set out. This essay topic was seen in a recent IELTS tests... Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people ...